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Admission_of solitary neural by Hizzie Admission_of solitary neural by Hizzie
*Copied from FA*
This has been floating around the computer for a while now I keep forgetting to upload it. Here it is tho.

Collab I started with Inadvertant ages and ages ago and than pulled Java into. My coloring is so flat and ugly, and I wish the picture flowed better with the theme of the poem.

Poem by inadvertant inadvertant
Lineart by joejava joejava
They are both awesome at what they do you should checkt hem out <3
Original sketch, colors, background and layout by me
small help from [link] and [link]


How hard I tried | Now my hands are tied
The world doesn't care | They only stand and stare
You used to call me Angel | Words that now choke and strangle
Dance in joy, drift in light | My shadows and demons alone I'll fight
Ever on to madness, trapped in dream | Nobody left to hear me scream
Dig nails through my skin | Always reminded of imaginary sin
Locked inside this haze | God knows I've seen better days
They say it's all a test | Just need to rest
With words not spoken | T'was my life broken
Verbal knives rend through soul | My mind, never again to be whole
Nothing I can do | My thoughts, some reason linger on you
Caught in an undertow | True peace I shall never know
Wrought from pain | Cleansed in rain
Never again to see her | I am a Dreamer
Nothing left to see | None to come dream with me.
-Inadvertant-
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destinykitty Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the shadows look awesome
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Hizzie Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
thnz! i was worried i didnt do enough x3
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destinykitty Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nah I like it :D
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PlasticRabbits Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
you are awesome <3

but you don't need ME to tell YOU that
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Heimdal00 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I like the old paper look, with burninated edges. And that last line-and-a-half of the poem: "I am a dreamer | Nothing left to see | None to come dream with me"

I like all of it, but those things were just kinda particularly interesting
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Hizzie Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
well thank you dear <3
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wingring Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
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Great to see you finally submit this and again, I absolutely love it~ It's stunning to look at and the poem is also just fantastic. Great work on all your parts~

See what I did there? ^w^
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